Sunday, July 10, 2011
7-word Sentences
The lock opened with a soft 'click'. Two crafty thieves laughed softly. They opened the door and went in. One of them closed the door. They were both male. Both of them were tall and well-built. Still they broke in silently. The nearby clock tower chimed midnight. They did not waste a second. One of them checked the living room. The other checked the rooms. Many people were sleeping in the house. They had to be quiet. Accidentally, one of them pushed a vase. The vase fell with a 'CRASH'. The thieves rushed to the windows. They slid out before anyone was awake. It was such a close shave.
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Wengkhin, good job at staying at the limit of seven words a sentence! Although there is such a limit, I feel that you had done well at describing them as tall and well-built, and that the event where they slid into the house, and ended up knocking over a vase and escaping just in the nick of time. However, how can it be that the vase crashed so loudly and nobody was awake by the noise? And, the thieves came in through the door. Why would they rush to the windows instead? Wouldn't it be risky if the window is locked, so they should be rushing for the door? I feel that if you polish up your story, it would be a fantastic one. Good job and keep it up!
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